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Post by Starlight on Feb 27, 2009 19:29:32 GMT -5
I dunno, if I sneak off while you're in hystarical mode, you won't find me for hours.
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Post by Sleetfoot on Feb 27, 2009 19:30:14 GMT -5
...I went looking for you that one day...Then found nick and forgot about you...
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Post by Starlight on Feb 27, 2009 19:34:42 GMT -5
Yes, you're such a great hunter.
Although, you weren't mad at me then. *shrugs*
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Post by Bluesky on Feb 27, 2009 21:56:18 GMT -5
lol what happened? xD
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Post by Starlight on Feb 27, 2009 23:03:17 GMT -5
I got mad at one of the people we were eating lunch with, so I picked up my bag and left (apparently completely unnoticed). Jenna says she had been looking for me, but then got side-tracked talking to her friend Nick. I'm sure not even Nick could have distracted her, though, if she'd been really angry at me (for instance, if I'd been inactive in MountainClan).
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Post by Willowfoot on Feb 27, 2009 23:18:27 GMT -5
GETTING ON TOPIC, NOW
How is it going to start? And we're assuming that MountainClan will win. How shall Light be killed (or die, if she like fell off a cliff or something, or maybe she could just end up going crazy and that could count as "falling".).
EDIT: Psst, Starlight. I have an idea for the Prophecy. Since, y'know, they're usually really cryptic.
"Above the stone titans in a black sky, two stars appear, shining bold and bright, but if one is brighter than the other, the war will be won."
Something like that? Instead of directly mentioning the clans and the mountains, I mean. And the prophecies are usually accompanied by a vision, so... Maybe instead of actual words, here's what I have in mind.
In Starlight's dream/vision, Galaxyfur takes her to the top of a mountain. The sky is completely black with no moon or stars. Then two stars show up above each camp. Starlight's gets brighter and brighter and Light's gets dimmer and dimmer until it goes out.
That's just what I have in mind, since Star asked for opinions on it?
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Post by Lightfur on Feb 28, 2009 13:32:07 GMT -5
Mm, but the ending shouldn't be pre-determined. There has to be a chance that the MountainClan cats will lose.
Also, I believe that it's going to begin with the MountainClan cats in their camp, Wildstar and Regalpaw (plus probably some other cats, which can be decided) having recently gone out on patrol. Stonepelt comes racing into camp, warns them of the leopards. Of course they freak out and think of the patrol, and send reinforcements to warn them. The patrol is attacked, and during the battle Regalpaw is mortally wounded (Not killed outright because he needs his warrior name.). The reinforcements arrive and fight off the leopards, which retreat. Regalpaw receives his warrior name (Regalpelt, I believe) and dies.
Then we move on from there.
(At least, that's what I've gathered)
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Post by Wildstar on Feb 28, 2009 13:48:30 GMT -5
Pretty much what Lightfur just said, except maybe a little prologue piece before that with Glacier explaining the recent scent-markings of intruders and such-which.
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Post by Willowfoot on Feb 28, 2009 16:31:38 GMT -5
ooc: Ok.
Are we ready then? Should we start the roleplay in here or start a new thread so that we don't have to sift through 5 pages of preparation?
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Post by Sleetfoot on Feb 28, 2009 17:42:18 GMT -5
Yes... On topicness is good
I like the idea of the black sky and seeing the two stars but I'm not really fond of your version of the prophecy, Willow. i dunno, it doesn't seem to flow as well.
And I agree that we need to start like...now
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Post by Starlight on Feb 28, 2009 18:14:00 GMT -5
I agree, the ending shouldn't be pre-determined. I was thinking it would start with Starlight receiving the prophecy and telling Wildy, then flip over to the leopards. Their patrol should come back with news of MountainClan in the vicinity and they decide to attack. Then time skip to their attack on MountainClan, where Regalpaw is injured, becomes Regalpelt, and dies.
And the prophecy is awesome, except that the two stars in a black sky part doesn't work out exactly. It does for Starlight, since she's a black cat, but it doesn't work for Light exactly.
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Post by Sleetfoot on Feb 28, 2009 18:19:20 GMT -5
But It doesn't have to be simbolic of their pelts.
Ok... I have to mention that the names are confusing... We have Light the leopard Lihtfur, our deputy and Starlight, our medic...
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Post by Willowfoot on Feb 28, 2009 19:42:50 GMT -5
Should I change her name?
It's hard to explain why I thought a black sky would work.
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Post by Sleetfoot on Feb 28, 2009 20:09:57 GMT -5
I dunno if you shou;d change it...
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Post by Starlight on Feb 28, 2009 20:35:07 GMT -5
Also, I was thinking maybe falling stars, to represent that the stars would be found on Earth and not in the heavens.
I tried putting the prophecy into a haiku, because the first two lines worked out right.
From within the stone titans, Two Stars shall appear; The brighter brings victory.
Edit: You can change the name if you want, Willow, but I'm sure we'll manage to keep it straight if you're attached to Light's name.
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